I keep score. Behind your back. I mark the passage of time. In heartbreak. Moments black as the lines I draw. You are blind to them, as they part of me. My shadowy hands work the indifferent flesh.
“Why would you do that?” The words hang. There is no trace of whom spoke it.
Echoes emptiness fills. The coldness adds another layer of ice.
“My dear, it’s the charcoal from my soul!” I realize she noticed after all
I kept staring at the image — fascinated and repulsed. You captured both emotions in your post. I agree, you could have gone darker and creepier, but usually can’t we all.
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It’s really on that edge of stranger things. I could have really cranked out some serious horror about her keeping her victims hands in latex gloves and…..
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Yup.
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Fascinating take,marking the years on her. Not thinking she notices, but truly she does. Yet there seems to be so much heart break between them and sorrow, yet “the charcoal” of her soul, seems to kind of hopeful. Like even though they hurt each other, they fit after all.
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Silver lining of charcoal is it can be reignited. Yes, there’s a gulf between. It’s probably hand dug
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Wow – this poem goes perfect with the photo prompt! Great!
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Thank you my dear. It is a really creepy image with so much potential.
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So much depth and pathos in your poem and your pic said it all.
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Thank you. The image conjures several ideas most of them live in a dark place
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I enjoyed the creepyness. Nice!
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The image had a real dark presence. It just seemed right to add to it. 😀 Thank you for the kind words
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Ooh, an eerie take to the photo prompt! Well done!
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Thank you. I liked the image. I’m glad it had a eerie feel to it. I wanted that creepy/non feeling thought running through it. 😀
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You did just that! You are welcome. 🙂
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