Void – Commentary Po.em

Falling in to yesterday 

Eternal quest

Butterfly or moth

Searching for flower or flame

Slipstreams into fact

Tumbling letters break words

Nothing held or possessed 

Like shadows in the dark

Another commentary po.em with words from Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudenslip.wordpress.com and http://in25wordsmoreorleswordpress.com, and myself.  Her words are in italics.  Please stop by a visit her! 

Missed Chance -Commentary Po.em

In the peripheral vision of your eye

Waving from my attention

Arms out stretched 

Fingers feeling in the air

Like shadows in the dark

Lingering memories pull away

Rushing up and over

Only to crawl and slither

Another commentary po.em collaboration between Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com, and myself.  Her words are in italics.  pleas stop by her site and her smaller works at http://in25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com