Geoffrey watches the morning light turn to harsh noon. The shadows fade away fron the stately halls. Tapestries with rich colors retreat to washed out halls. Distance voices race down halls. The tours are starting again.
His pale face and hollow eyes dim. The children bring a challenge to his type. The adults look past him and sometimes walk through him. Time changes things for the living. Today will be tomorrow for Geoffrey again.
“Hey, I think I see a ghost!” a high-pitched voice rises above the crowd.
Geoffrey waves and smiles. The adults never understand the kids reaction of wonder and fright.
Written as part of a challenge called flash fiction for aspiring writers . Details are available at https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/06/12/fffaw-challenge-week-of-june-13-2017-2/
Thank you MajesticGoldenRose for our photo prompt this week!
I really like this ghostly tale! Thank you!
Healed
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Thank you for the kind words! 😀 I’ll be glad to follow the link
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LOL! The children can see the ghost, Geoffrey, but the adults can’t see him. Hahaha! Cute story, Mark!!
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Every castle needs a ghost. Word count made a good choice in involving children.
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That is true! It makes it more fun when you involve children. 😀
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Poor old Geoffrey, but I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. Well done.
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Thank you. I associate castle with ghosts. It seemed best to leave him somewhat passive. Hopefully it feels melancholy.
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