PHOTO PROMPT © Marie Gail Stratford
Written as part of a challenge called Friday fictioneers, https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com.
Warm air swirls between the buildings downtown. Far below cars and trucks battle to get out of here as fast as possible. A horn blasts. It echoes across the faces of the towers of concrete and glass.
I look over at my friends Rocky. He’s ghost white. Thirty eight floors above the chaos. It’s a calming feeling, kind of. I feel bad for him in some ways. First time stuck on a platform where a cable broke. With the harnesses you just hung there. The world around you. Peaceful.
“Hey, Rocky enjoy the view. Half hour, tops! They’ll bring us back up.” I try to get him to relax. It doesn’t work.
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Thank you. I found you in spam. I appreciate the kind words
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Cheese-n-rice that’s terrifying! Note to self: never ever consider a job as a window washer. lol
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But the views are to die for! OK so noone died. I suppose a heart attack could happen. 😉
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I think he has the wrong job. Great setting of the scene, I wouldn’t want to be in that situation, great view or not.
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I think I’d try it. I might have something wrong with me though
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Great perspective!
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For the one with eyes open, yes
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A cliff-hanger of a story. Nicely done.
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Very much so. The man made cliffs don’t offer as many way out either.
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Ohhhh, that was a good one!
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Setting the scene is the best part! 😀
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Indeed it is! 🙂
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Dear Mark,
I’m terrified of heights. I’m with Rocky.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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But the view! 😉
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Well done! Poor Rocky! Just keep trying to soothe his fears…
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He’s not exactly dealing well with the fear thing right now. But what a view of he opens the eyes. 😀
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LOL! Indeed! Though fear of heights is a biggie…that and fear of death from plummeting down…
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He’s securely tied to the scaffolding. Of course, the scaffolding isn’t tied as well as it once was. He’ll be fine.
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There ya go…
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I don’t think I would relax either, but, I would not be up there in the first place. 😉
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I’d love to know the feeling lol 🙂
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After skydiving, I could guess about what it might feel like. But once the freaking out part was over,it would probably be very cool. 😎
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Haha, I went indoor skydiving so I think I have the feeling of suspension down…painful 🙂
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The real thing doesn’t. Well,your so high of the ground that depth prespection is useless. After a couple minutes you’re on the ground.
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It’s not the fear of heights, but the fear of hard landings. 😃
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A great imagining of the sensation of dangling over the abyss
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Thank you. I figured the calm one was better to tell the story. While cares if your dangling when you have a decent view. 😉
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