Saturday Mix – Just to be Sure

“He was such a shallow man. Always try to show he had risen above hi snake like personality. Glad to see you succumb to illness.” Tina kicks dirt into the open grave. Her pale thin face sneaks a peek at the five other mourners. “It’s go to see you in the hole but it should be much further. I’d put you below Hell. Maybe that’s deep enough.”

Tina fakes a dab at her eyes. “They came just to be sure you’re dead also!”

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5 thoughts on “Saturday Mix – Just to be Sure

  1. Nice one! I especially like the last line…it’s turns the whole tale around. First, you are thinking Tina is the one with the problem but then realise it is the man in the grave. Thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix!

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