Future Pasts Complimentary Po.em

Days of reckoning, days of glory?

Finish lines in moving sand

Vaulting into hyperspace

Passing future pasts 

Foot race to reason

Across ribbon candy fantasy land

Another commentary po.em from  Lorraine and myself.  Her words are italicIzed.  More of her words are located at http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com and http://25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com

One thought on “Future Pasts Complimentary Po.em

  1. Reblogged this on Lorraine's frilly freudian slip and commented:
    Another commentary po.em well crafted by Mark from our commentary string. Reblogged without reading as I am still composing my po.ems from the same string where time unspooled, rainbow puddles splashed, and we traveled through the universe. So, more to come from me (and from Mark, I suspect)

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