Free to explore each other’s
Kindred spirits left unbound
Tastes desire longing to run
Full frontal onslaught, eyes wide
Stolen moments lost in amazement
Touching of souls; touching of faces
Another commentary po.em from Lorraine and myself. Her words are italicIzed. More of her words are located at http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com and http://25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com
I am left looking for more…
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Then we did our job…. 😉 Leaving things a little hanging makes them kindred afterall
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We can write right some good sometimes! Very nice flow, seeing as a po.em. Image suits words; brings unity.
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We have a connection and an ability to play of the others words. I really liked the Sagauros at sunset and the pair was perfect
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