Breath held in longing
Nervous eyes hoping it’s mutual
Tentative touch of hand
Waiting for return on feelings
Scarred and scared
Calm in distress, Rabid in peace
Go for the throat or heart
Another collaborative effort between Lorraine and myself. Her words are italicized. She can be found at http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com and http:25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com Please stop by and visit Lorraine.
Reblogged this on Lorraine's frilly freudian slip and commented:
Mark’s interpretation of our back and forth.
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Another wonderful collaborative poem!
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Thank you my dear. We have a good run with a couple here
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Mark, I really like this piece. So much said/unsaid.
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I think we had in down in order perfectly. Your line put the exclamation point on it.
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