Falling in to yesterday
Eternal quest
Butterfly or moth
Searching for flower or flame
Slipstreams into fact
Tumbling letters break words
Nothing held or possessed
Like shadows in the dark
Another commentary po.em with words from Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudenslip.wordpress.com and http://in25wordsmoreorleswordpress.com, and myself. Her words are in italics. Please stop by a visit her!
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Karin Ravasio nature photography, motivation, products
HOPELESSLY ROMANTIC
An onion has many layers. So have I!
Views on Football from the Front Row
Life is simple... So take notes
Never get lost in the Sauce
Fiction Writing
my writing junkyard
A dose of fetish. Good friends. An incomparable muse.
I want to sing like the birds sing, not worrying about who hears or what they think.
My view of this wonderful and crazy life - as I travel and explore.
A different kind of beautiful
An Introvert's "Ice Cream Social"
We are freaks. Society dejects us...so we find solace in things that don't exist...
Welcome To My World
Life is just a story. And I've got a pen.
"Good science fiction doesn’t have safe spaces.” -Mark Pontin
Nice collaborative poem! Beautiful photo!
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Thank you my dear. We have a lot of material to figure out. The image is a tiny run off along a mountain road. I don’t think it’s even 5 feet wide
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Ya’ll seem to be having a lot of fun with your collaborations.
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yes it’s fun. The best part is it’s random wordplay to some extent. Weaving the poetry together is all about framing. And we often frame things different so the same lines come out differently
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LOL!! Whatever it is that ya’ll do with it it always comes out nice.
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Great view
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Reblogged this on Lorraine's frilly freudian slip and commented:
Mark has composed another commentary po.em. This commentary stream has been particularly rich in imagery which Mark has used to the po.et’s advantage. Stop by his project21words.wordpress.com for his own, and our combined thoughts micro-bursts.
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Many thanks darling😀
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