Void – Commentary Po.em

Falling in to yesterday 

Eternal quest

Butterfly or moth

Searching for flower or flame

Slipstreams into fact

Tumbling letters break words

Nothing held or possessed 

Like shadows in the dark

Another commentary po.em with words from Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudenslip.wordpress.com and http://in25wordsmoreorleswordpress.com, and myself.  Her words are in italics.  Please stop by a visit her! 

8 thoughts on “Void – Commentary Po.em

      1. yes it’s fun. The best part is it’s random wordplay to some extent. Weaving the poetry together is all about framing. And we often frame things different so the same lines come out differently


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