In the peripheral vision of your eye
Waving from my attention
Arms out stretched
Fingers feeling in the air
Like shadows in the dark
Lingering memories pull away
Rushing up and over
Only to crawl and slither
Another commentary po.em collaboration between Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com, and myself. Her words are in italics. pleas stop by her site and her smaller works at http://in25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com
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photos and thoughts for sharing
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An onion has many layers. So have I!
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A dose of fetish. Good friends. An incomparable muse.
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My view of this wonderful and crazy life - as I travel and explore.
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A snake at the end!
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Just flees the scene like the snake. 😉
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Oh, I see. That makes sense.
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The fun of working very small. Things need multiple meanings
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Reblogged this on Lorraine's frilly freudian slip and commented:
Mark has composed a commentary po.em, coupled with the image, that evokes emotions and pulls out feelings.
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Oh I had an image so close to the foggy bridge after playing with the words
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Love the po.em and the image! You’ve put the lines together to create a flow of feelings.
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