Missed Chance -Commentary Po.em

In the peripheral vision of your eye

Waving from my attention

Arms out stretched 

Fingers feeling in the air

Like shadows in the dark

Lingering memories pull away

Rushing up and over

Only to crawl and slither

Another commentary po.em collaboration between Lorraine, http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com, and myself.  Her words are in italics.  pleas stop by her site and her smaller works at http://in25wordsmoreorless.wordpress.com


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