commentary po.etry: drought

Another collaborative effort between Lorraine and myself..

in 25 words more or less

Crossing streams – weaving different comment threads together on loom of my poetics. My comments/words are in italics.

Four po.ems; 2 streams. Mark’s commentary po.etry can be found @ and


Emptiness smiles like vulture

wheeling overhead

The drums cry

violins thunder

lightening strobes ‘cross sky

Arroyos want to taste their tears

cracked lips moisten

mad tango

© Mark & Lorraine

image via (famhud)

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