commentary po.etry: after the fall

Please take a look. Two together on onepoem

Lorraine's frilly freudian slip

Another commentary po.em through Mark and my collaboration. My words/comments are in italics.

This stream is yielding po.ems for both: Awash in Clouds constructed by Mark.

Mark is looking for contributors to his project21words blog – check it out: Hey write something

after the fall

eternity measured in moments

beginnings end abruptly

despondency it’s course

longing it’s reason

regret it’s will

remorse it’s undoing

revelations and repulsions

both equally melt into shade

© Lorraine & Mark

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