Awash in Clouds

A washed in clouds 

Thunder echoes within

Lightning strobes ‘crossbreeding sky 

Arroyos want to taste their tears

Cracked lips moisten

Emptiness smiles like a vulture

Wheeling overhead

Despondency it’s course

Longing its reason

Regret it’s will

Remote it’s undoing

Commentary poetry by Lorraine and myself.  Her words are italicized.  She has more of them that can be seen at http://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com 

other examples of commentary po.ems

https://myfrillyfreudianslip.wordpress.com/2017/01/28/conceit-of-lies/

https://project21words.wordpress.com/2017/01/31/tango-for-one/?preview=true

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