There’s a place. Peaceful. Quiet. The bustle of the city avoids this place. The East River makes no sound as it conveys water to the sea. The wind sings as it pass through channels of buildings behind. The world is at bay.
Alex sits in place. The torments of his life are somewhere else. The cold March air keeps others away too. Solitude is hard to keep once it’s found.
His mind flashes pieces of what brought him here. The voices raised. The feeling of being lost. A body without a real place. … This is his place. It’s the only place.
Peace enters his mind. His heart is too wounded for that. It’s beating, but labored in its rhythm. The headache is fading fast. The tightness in the chest from screaming is almost gone. The blood pressure slowly loosening it’s grip.
In a moment things fade. Vision goes dark. His place brings him that final peace.
Written as part of a challenge called Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Details can be found at https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com
How bittersweet. I wonder what his problem was?
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Some people just fade away.
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True
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Beautifully written. All the melancholy emotions flowed through me very naturally. Simple, subtle and natural. Enjoyed it.
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Thank you very much. It had a prefect feel for melancholy. Of course, I saw a dead body.
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Thanks for noticing that. I’m in a place with awful Internet. I’ll have to try to adjust it when I get home in a few days. I’m glad the layout is still good. I appreciate the comments!😀
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It’s sad that he could not get help, but not knowing his background, perhaps he was fortunate to pass away there on the bench in peaceful solitude.
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I didn’t get a good feel on where he was in life. It and distance and cold in picture.
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Sad that he had so much suffering in his life and could not find enough peace to be able to survive.
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Some times is the only peace someone will know.
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Oh wow…I didn’t expect you to kill him off! But in a way, there’s a peacefulness throughout your story that works well with the photo. Nice job 🙂
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Thank you darling. I like the twist. The relaxing into an end is poetic easy to go.
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Indeed! 🙂
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How sad but such a beautiful story! He finally finds his place of peace and he is dying. Great story, Mark!
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It was such a peaceful picture. I think the snow made me kill him off. I just saw a dead person. Than you my dear
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Oh my gosh, really? The snow made you want to kill him off? LOL!
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I think so. Even in a good winter, it kills the soul off for months at a time. So death and snow kind of blend well for me
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OH, I see. No wonder you want to move to Arizona! I hope you get to move in the coming year!
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That’s the dream. I’m not desperate enough to go to phoenix yet. But given another winter I might. ☺
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Hahahaha! I almost moved to Phoenix about 2 years ago but I decided I didn’t want to live in that big of a city.
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Its the 120 degree Temps that would be the problem. That’s too much dry heat
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Yes, it gets pretty hot there in the summer but the winters are nice.
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I seen its forecasted at 115 today! Not good for five months
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Oh that is really hot! Glad I don’t live there!
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That’s what I’m thinking too. 100 is still hot!
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Yes, even 100 degrees is hot but at least it isn’t humid.
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Powerful piece. It’s a beautiful place I think, if one is looking for solitude and peace. I’m sad he died there on a bench and couldn’t find tranquility in any other place or with any people in life; but it’s also not the worst pls e to die either. The view is beautiful. Well done!
Also I’m not sure if you do awards or not, but I have nominated your for an award. Completely up to you on whether you participate or not.
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Thank you darling! I answer the award questions but don’t display them. I appreciate the thought. I actually was leaning toward him just being dead and noone noticing him. But that was boring. 😃
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