We are playing with a word count. But adding a challenge to the mix. So a picture is worth 1000 words, we’re going for 100.
#everydayinspirations
Her hand grips a white rose. But the rose has it’s thorns in Rose as well. She spins it between fingers until the pin holes let out a stream. It comforts her.
Below her spills out the future. Her cards neatly spread. Eight cards waiting to relieve her pain. Only her final card is death.
She smiles. Her heart skips a beat. It’s white rose is her’s. Everything fades away. Her pain can at last be gone.
Behind the card is a meaning of great change. The novice doesn’t realize the cards are pointing toward change. Her pain goes. She does not.
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Great story! Sounds like she wants death but doesn’t get it. But, at least her pain is taken away!
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If you know the song “She Talks to Angels” by the Black Crows, that is what she reminds me of. Half lost, half woman, and a half ass plan at life
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Hahaha! I don’t recall that song, but it sounds interesting!
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I’m sure you heard it. It’s from 1989. So it’s been around awhile. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_5U0M9ErGA&sns=em
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I don’t think I have heard this song before.
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It’s a nice song kind of reminds me of Janis Joplin in style. A little dark in that you are left wondering if she’s crazy or divine.
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Oh yes! Janis Joplin!
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It has that blues feel
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She was a great singer that died much much to early in life. Very sad ending.
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Yes it’s very sad. She had a crazy life. I can’t imagine how much music we missed out on.
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She did have a crazy life. We missed out on a lot of music because of her death.
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It’s hard to believe her career was so short.
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That’s because she lived hard and fast.
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thanks for sharing your response to this week’s writing prompt 🙂
This is a fascinating and interesting piece – how you’ve written a story that explores certain elements, literally, and then of course, from a philosophical point of view – and perspective. There is a certain quietness to this piece, while the tension and almost “wild ride” is there too – it can almost be felt. Which is probably why the ending is so powerful. Almost as if death is grinning – a not quite “last laugh”. And the word choice “novice” – well that is interesting – actually I find it very peculiar, but not strange – and I’d love to know the idea behind this.
Hope you have a wonderful day 🙂
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Thank you darling. First part is at one time I could have given you a first class reading. Death is the ultimate change. Her self inflicted pain is a hallmark of youth (novice). Death always had the last laugh. But I combined her into the song “She talks to Angels” by Black Crows. I even have her faith in next challenge piece. You made my day wonderful with the comment! 😉☺😃😎😉
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Okay – thanks for the additional info – I was thinking along the same lines …. but oddly too – perhaps because of the white rose image and the word – I also wandered to “novice” – in a religious sense. As for the Black Crows – love that song. Totally powerful.
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White rose is a strong symbol of purity and love mixed. I think linking it to a religious sense is also perfect. Mysticism is part of religion.
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definitely …. and in a traditional tarot card representation, it is used and is highly symbolic – so it all ties in perfectly 🙂
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It made me a character as well. Rose
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