This is a unique flash fiction challenge where we provide you with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided Don’t forget to use the opening sentence… This challenge runs from Monday to Sunday! Get creative and have fun finishing the story!
Please include the photo with your bit of flash and a link back to this post. Do not forget to click on the blue frog and add your link so that others can enjoy your story too! Now let’s have some fun!
The family had no idea that little Luigi would grow up to be.
The family pizza business was booming. The family tradition was passed down in the old country. In the new country, there were two ways to afford feeding your family. Groceries or restaurant. The big family pushed pies out across the neighborhood.
The Catholic family had it’s place, save one. Luigi. He was allergic to tomatoes. The family hid him. His private school was said to be exclusive. But how can a pizza place have an allergic child in it? No one would eat what made their own sick.
The family already contributed one to the church, Father Salvatore, and one to the army. A second either placewould be admitting they couldn’t afford their kids.
The plan worked for Twenty-three years. When college came and went, he was on his own. The county government made him health inspector. He doesn’t visit much any more.
Poor Luigi. No wonder he doesn’t visit much. This is dark humor, funny but sad. What a family! Well done, AM. 😀 — Suzanne
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All families have stories
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Poor Luigi, hidden away to protect the family’s business reputation! I just thought I’d point out that near the beginning it should probably be ‘passed’ not ‘pasted’. 🙂
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Thanks. I’ll go take care of that. I appreciate it.
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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how unfortunate to be allergic to tomato in a pizza loving family! great story 🙂
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Had to find a problem with him. No reason to worry about him if he was golden child
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Funny take and amusing story😀
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Thank very much
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So, it all comes down to an allergy? Go figure! Nicely done Mark. Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
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It was a fun little piece.
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I enjoyed your tale!
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Ha, the dark secret of the family… Nice take on the prompt!
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Thank you. Hidden things always come to light.
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The irony of the job lol. Good story, nice way to look at the prompt
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I figured there woukd be Italian restaurant stories every where with it. The black sheep of the family is such a good character.
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Surprisingly every story on this simple prompt is so interesting and different. Black sheep, of course darkness calls for you haha
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You catch that, did you? 😉
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You’ll be surprised
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I need a critical look at something. If you get a chance, are dialogue and characters solid? Just posted it https://any1mark66.wordpress.com/2015/08/25/1wbga1/
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Alright I just had a victory dance moment. I’m flattered you need my review. But as ecstatic as I am right now, I’m hitting the road and might have time till late evening so:( i just can’t ignore when ‘ting’ notification shows on WP lol
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When you get the chance offs good. Thanks darling I appreciate it so much
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It was amazing, I left my feedback 😏
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You’re too kind. I appreciate it
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Thank goodness he finally graduated and got away from the pizza business! Great story Mark!
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Many thanks my dear
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County health inspector… I see why he no longer visits!! The restaurant is dangerous to his health!
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It would be the nightmare scenario for any family business. The return of the outcast
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