This is a unique flash fiction challenge where we provide you with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided Don’t forget to use the opening sentence… This challenge runs from Monday to Sunday! Get creative and have fun finishing the story!

Please include the photo with your bit of flash and a link back to this post. Do not forget to click on the blue frog and add your link so that others can enjoy your story too! Now let’s have some fun!


The family had no idea that little Luigi would grow up to be.

The family pizza business was booming.   The family tradition was passed down in the old country.  In the new country, there were two ways to afford feeding your family.  Groceries or restaurant.   The big family pushed pies out across the neighborhood.

The Catholic family had it’s place, save one.   Luigi.  He was allergic to tomatoes.   The family hid him.  His private school was said to be exclusive.  But how can a pizza place have an allergic child in it?  No one would eat what made their own sick.

The family already contributed one to the church,  Father Salvatore, and one to the army.  A second either placewould be admitting they couldn’t afford their kids.

The plan worked for Twenty-three years.   When college came and went, he was on his own.   The county government made him health inspector.  He doesn’t visit much any more.

28 thoughts on “Luigi

      1. Alright I just had a victory dance moment. I’m flattered you need my review. But as ecstatic as I am right now, I’m hitting the road and might have time till late evening so:( i just can’t ignore when ‘ting’ notification shows on WP lol

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