This is a second look through this one. I could use an opinion on the story. I’m looking to make a short story out of it.
This is a second look through this one. I could use an opinion on the story. I’m looking to make a short story out of it.
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photos and thoughts for sharing
Karin Ravasio nature photography, motivation, products
HOPELESSLY ROMANTIC
An onion has many layers. So have I!
Views on Football from the Front Row
Life is simple... So take notes
Never get lost in the Sauce
Fiction Writing
my writing junkyard
A dose of fetish. Good friends. An incomparable muse.
I want to sing like the birds sing, not worrying about who hears or what they think.
My view of this wonderful and crazy life - as I travel and explore.
A different kind of beautiful
An Introvert's "Ice Cream Social"
We are freaks. Society dejects us...so we find solace in things that don't exist...
Welcome To My World
Life is just a story. And I've got a pen.
Coloring Outside the Lines 
My question is, if they’re taking back the ocean, why are they starting by blowing up an inn?
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See previous answer. But they will make the news this way! Terrorist mermaids! Breaking news!
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Hah! Terrorist mermaids with clam-bombs. I guess they are ‘shelling’ the resort!
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Very good. I was hoping someone would notice that. And the fishing for money for drinks.
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Looks like you have an extra ‘.’ in that URL. Here’s one that works. https://any1mark66.wordpress.com/2015/08/01/clam-shell-inn/
I enjoyed the story. I’d also like to find out what their (the mermaid’s) enemy actually is. I think there’s lots of possibility for a good short story.
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The enemy is man invading their ocean. I’m going for environmental with off shore oil and fishing. I figured a resort would be a splashy start. I’ll adjust the URL. I tried to paste it but went manually after a couple tries.
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