A little feedback

This is a second look through this one.  I could use an opinion on the story.  I’m looking to make a short story out of it.



6 thoughts on “A little feedback

    1. The enemy is man invading their ocean. I’m going for environmental with off shore oil and fishing. I figured a resort would be a splashy start. I’ll adjust the URL. I tried to paste it but went manually after a couple tries.

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